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And as I stutter awake
With my damn eyes gone heavy
I know I wanna go
But I know I’m not ready

I don’t wanna leave
But shudder to stay
These damn human conditions
Are gettin’ in my way

And I know it’s night
And I’m just a closed-eye to daylight
I can’t tell if I’m right
But who is? This shit ain’t black n’ white

It’s not outa’ sight
If I’m seeing right
But I can’t adjust without a drop of light

How can I despise what I can’t get outa’ my head?
How can you trip yourself into guilt
Not the other way instead
And I wish I didn’t care, say “Fuck this” and go to bed

You’re in my way
Yet outa’ reach
I don’t wanna care
But I can’t quit, I’m like a leech

You say “Hey I’ll be Ching Chong,
You be Cheech.”

You try to provoke
Say “Fuck her! Have another toke”
But I need to see straight
So get outa’ here with your smoke

And I just wish I was another in a crowd
I didn’t feel this need to spit aloud

But if you were me
And I was you
You’d see the light
And I could finally say
“Fuck this shit, aight?
Goodbye and goodnight.”
©2008-2009 ~MeKrob
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I freestyled this one night when I couldn't sleep.

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Fresh yo. And if I wasn't this white I'd comment on it as a rap, but ya know.

as a freestyle, thats great. if ya work on the form a little bit, that could be a great song thing. do i hear poetry slam?

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